Woah, all my points already here. Would add, and please don’t take this personal, but get a native speaker to do the voice over. You are unlucky to have a bad stereotype matched with your dialect.
In addition:
1. Don’t use thumbs up icons and smileys in your professional website. I’m not on Facebook.
2. So many grammar errors. Also in the video.
3. First overview in the video has so much information yet tells me nothing. To be honest your product already failed here for me. If not for the Ask HN I would close my tab and never look back.
4. What’s up with all the multi-page flashy text box questions? For me, on a professional site, don’t do animations and just keep a single page for one question list. Be really, really careful with animations. The one on your landing page already touched my nerves btw. Feels like someone who does his first keynote/PowerPoint presentation. Animations everywhere.
In addition:
1. Don’t use thumbs up icons and smileys in your professional website. I’m not on Facebook.
2. So many grammar errors. Also in the video.
3. First overview in the video has so much information yet tells me nothing. To be honest your product already failed here for me. If not for the Ask HN I would close my tab and never look back.
4. What’s up with all the multi-page flashy text box questions? For me, on a professional site, don’t do animations and just keep a single page for one question list. Be really, really careful with animations. The one on your landing page already touched my nerves btw. Feels like someone who does his first keynote/PowerPoint presentation. Animations everywhere.