I think this is a much better redesign than the Exec one - because it actually is a redesign for the product as it stands - rather than a new design for a product with a substantially different message and positioning, which is what the Exec one read like to me.
Kyro is, from the post, a fan and a user of Flutter, which probably helped with that. The hardest design work to do is when you're a long way personally from the market the design is built for.
If I was wearing my design critique hat I'd be asking Kyro this though:
* Why is "Welcome to the future" - which tells you nothing about the product - pushed above the "Control iTunes and Spotify Using Gestures" sub - which does. The former is tone and mood setting device - why am I not picking up that tone and mood from the visual design? If I am is it necessary? What is it's purpose?
* Why move the video and social proof so far down the page - are they really less important?
* Is the navigation bar at the top really necessary? (home == your there. features == this page should convince, download == pretty darn obvious). Are there more useful things we can use that vertical space for? (see previous point)
* The logo is still a bit "meh" to my eyes - but I suspect Kyro already knows that and it wasn't the focus of the changes done.
* The background noise on the main image is a little bit strong to my eyes and pull the eye away from the content a bit
* Is the "Flutter in the news" headline necessary? If you take it away will the reader be confused?
* The move lines on the hand don't quite work. "Why is the hand sweating" was a comment from my partner :-)
Kyro is, from the post, a fan and a user of Flutter, which probably helped with that. The hardest design work to do is when you're a long way personally from the market the design is built for.
If I was wearing my design critique hat I'd be asking Kyro this though:
* Why is "Welcome to the future" - which tells you nothing about the product - pushed above the "Control iTunes and Spotify Using Gestures" sub - which does. The former is tone and mood setting device - why am I not picking up that tone and mood from the visual design? If I am is it necessary? What is it's purpose?
* Why move the video and social proof so far down the page - are they really less important?
* Is the navigation bar at the top really necessary? (home == your there. features == this page should convince, download == pretty darn obvious). Are there more useful things we can use that vertical space for? (see previous point)
* The logo is still a bit "meh" to my eyes - but I suspect Kyro already knows that and it wasn't the focus of the changes done.
* The background noise on the main image is a little bit strong to my eyes and pull the eye away from the content a bit
* Is the "Flutter in the news" headline necessary? If you take it away will the reader be confused?
* The move lines on the hand don't quite work. "Why is the hand sweating" was a comment from my partner :-)