I did more or less the same thing for the company I'm at now, and included a separate note in my response indicating what I changed and why. They seemed more than happy to sign it.
The next version of the agreement (we sign it once/year) actually included language very similar to my changes. Admittedly, I don't know if I impacted that or if it was independent, but it did make me feel good.
The next version of the agreement (we sign it once/year) actually included language very similar to my changes. Admittedly, I don't know if I impacted that or if it was independent, but it did make me feel good.